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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 18, 2004 19:03:08 GMT -5
Okay heres the start!
There in the entrance was Myrial. Myrial was wearing black punk pants that went slightly below her knee. With red (all star) converce with black shoe laces. With a red top.( Use to be a long sleeved shirt, but she ripped them off) She also had a lot of piercings. On her left ear she had 5 piercing, and on her right ear she had 3 piercings. She had also pierced her belly bottom.(Her shirt was just high enough to show it off) She had also piercedher nose. Then after all of that she had streaked her hair black!
"What is everyone looking at?"asked Myrial innocently.
"What d-did you d-do to y-yourself?" asked Myrial's mom who was still in shock.
"What do you mean?" Myrial asked once again innocently.
At the sight of her appearence. Myrial's mom wasent blinking. Myrial's dad spilled his drink on himself and didnt even notice. Aaron was chocking on his food. Josh and Seth had horrified looks on their faces. Adrina had a disbeling look on her face. Then Vilmos was drooling. Myrial could only smirk at this sight. The looks on their faces were priceless.
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Karri
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Post by Karri on Sept 18, 2004 22:48:59 GMT -5
I liked it. Please post more,
Karri
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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 18, 2004 23:14:43 GMT -5
Myrial went and gave her dad a kiss on the cheek and then she sat down next to her brother.
"Oh good mornin'." Myrial's dad said looking up.
"Mornin' Dad, Mornin' Aaron, oh and...Mornin' Mom." said
Myrial hoping her mother wasent mad.
"Mornin' Myr." her brother responded while loading his
plate once again.
"Mornin' darling, why do you always take so long to come and eat breakfast?" Myrial's mom asked.
"I was still sleeping when I heard you, mum, then I went and took a shower." explained Myrial. Sighing in relief that her mother wasent mad, then started loading her plate.
"Well hurry up were leaving son!" her mother said.
"Oh good," said Aaron. "I am buying a present for Adrina, oh, and mum, Vilmos and Adrina are coming
tommorow moring to stay for the rest of the summer,
their is only 2 weeks left."
'Good Vilmoss coming, I wonder what he will think of my
new look' Myrial thought.
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Post by murtaghsbro on Sept 19, 2004 0:07:56 GMT -5
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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 19, 2004 15:11:20 GMT -5
I am here to write a FF! Its my first one so I dont know if its good! So plz dont critisize to much!
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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 19, 2004 15:19:43 GMT -5
Myrial woke up to the screaming of her mother. Her voice was coming from downstairs in the kitchen. Yawning, and rubbing the sleep out of her eyes, Myrial sat up on her bed. Once her vision became clear she looked around her room. The sun light shinning through her closed window and onto her wooden floor. For some reason her room looked smaller, then she noticed an extra bed besides hers.
"Myrial this is the last warning, get down here now and eat some breakfast now, before we leave for Diagon Alley!" her mother yelled from below, snapping Myrial out of her thoughts.
Ignoring her mothers warning she looked over to her nightstand where her clock was. It read 8:45 A.M. Groaning Myrial got out of bed, and walked over to her mirrior that was hanging on her closet door. Frowning at her reflection, Myrial decided to change her apperance....
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Post by murtaghsbro on Sept 19, 2004 15:23:49 GMT -5
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Post by Karri on Sept 19, 2004 15:33:10 GMT -5
Yes please post more it is intersting.
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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 19, 2004 15:37:52 GMT -5
I was typing a long post on my ff and my user name logged out so it deleted my post when i clicked post!
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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 19, 2004 15:39:11 GMT -5
Thanks to for reading I will post again soon. Check back okay?
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Post by Karri on Sept 19, 2004 15:45:52 GMT -5
Hey, I think this is really good so far. Sorry but I have to go now. Hope to be back tomorrow.
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Post by spiderqueen on Sept 19, 2004 15:46:35 GMT -5
Okay! Heres more!
"Myrial! Come and eat dinner!" yelled Myrial's mom. Then she turned back to the others. " I wonder what shes up to?"
"I dont know what she up to-" started Seth.
"But we will find out!" finished Josh. Both with a smile on their faces.
"Oh No You Dont, Myrial probrably needs her privacy, and none of you are going to do anything about it!" warned Myrial's mom.
"But mum-" wined both the twins.
"NO buts!" Myrial's mom said. "Understand!"
"Yes mum!" both said with disappointed looks on their faces.
The trio couldnt help but laugh. Aaron was wipping tears of his eyes, when they heard footsteps coming down the stairs. Everyone turned to the entrance of the kitchen all wondering what Myrial was up to. When Myrial entered the kitchen. Myrial's mom gasped.
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